Character Descriptions

Room 14 have been learning how to write effective character descriptions - what do you think of these?
To help us with our inspiration we watched "Big Buck Bunny" and began by describing the characters on this short film.

The Superhuman Whip Lash - By Cassady Glasgow
With her beautiful blue butterfly wings she swings through the sky with her lazered green whip lashed boots. She has elastic green and green goey hair, a green top and shorts to protect her from the lava and fire. At night she swoops through the air while her electric suit glows light green in the dark. When a monster is near she draws a see through bubble around herself and uses her lazered whip to protect her from getting hurt. - COME AND CHECK OUT CASSEADY'S SUPERHERO IN THE TIPA AWHINA SPACE.

The Smashing Smash - By Brandon Gibbons
The Smashing Smash has the hanner of the demon. He is covered in demon bombs and bombs of ultimate doom!!! His sleek black suit is also a telly-porter because he lives underground. - CHECK OUT BRANDON'S SUPERHERO IN THE TIP AWHINA SPACE.

Chinky the Goblin - By Madeline Giles and Nicole Yong
The little goblin has a water pipe like chocolate coloured hat. His cloak is casual, shaggy and worn. He has a chubby, smiley and sunny bright face. His pipe is vanilla coloured and jagged. Chinky has flat, shiny polished midnight black shoes and his lives in a toadstool house Jollyville. He likes to build houses for new people to move into. Chinky's favourite food is ground up acorns and is his spare time he likes to study. - CHECK OUT WHAT CHINKY LOOKS LIKE BY COMING INTO ROOM 14.

Freaky the Dog - By Tom Compton
Freaky is a three headed dog who lives at Hogwarts school. He has razor sharp teeth and a very SCARY roar! He will eat whoever he wants... except for his friends. He is made up of three types of dogs - a Bulldog, a Golden Retriever and a Beagle. He has huge knifelike claws and is body is super strong. So if you are a witch or wizard at Hogwarts ... ... run away. WHAT DOES FREAKY LOOK LIKE? COME AND HAVE A LOOK

Fireball Breather - by Danny Love
Fireball Breather is a furious beastly dragon that breathes our lava fire balls. His knife like claws can rip a building down in one hit. His glowing red eyes are so shiny that he can blind people and his lava like mouth, wings and tongue can turn someone into ash. He has super razor sharp horns on his bony head that can rip a tree out of the ground. OHHHH SCARY - ASK DANNY FOR A PICTURE

Lilly - by Georgia Cavander
Lilly loves dancing with children waving her long wavy hair with her white pearly necklace. She has a friend Dolphin called Penelope and she swims to her giving her kisses with her red cherry lips. Her long white dress has a fluffy white petticoat and she wears a gorgeous gold crown. LILLY IS NOT YOU THINK SHE IS - COME AND FIND OUT MORE

Jagger - By Baileigh Nicholas

With his beady black eyes, Jagger is a dog crossed with a slug and dragon. He has medium pebble shaped nose and he has a good sense of smell. Jagger has a sharped spiked collar as sharp as a thistle. Punie horns and a purple scabby body with a white scaly tummy. He has killing grim teeth and in one bite he can kill you. He has little mini pink wings and he lives in Blackberry forest and he moves by flapping his flappy wings. COME AND SEE BAILEIGH'S WRITING AND SEE WHAT JAGGER REALLY LOOKS LIKE!

Captain Dual Rocket - By Noah Cate

Captain Dual Rocket has a speed jet that makes him fly high in the sky. With his gun he can shoot the villans. He has 15 bullets to shoot each night. Captain dual rocket lives in New York City and with his arms he can punch people 30 times. He has a belt that shoots lasers for breaking through walls or metal. His jet pack can turn into a machine gun and it has 50 bullets. Captain Rocket has powerful gloves that turn into a chainsaw and an axe. - WHAT A SUPERHERO!!

Dronapeed - by Tyler Franklin

Dronapeed lives in a dark, spiky cave called Drona. He can kill a monster with a flick of his flaming red tail and kill call other Dronopeeds from his family. He can slither 235 km/ph along the ground. He has a black flaming mane with horns that can pick up tress out of the ground and blow flames out of the trunk. - OH COME AND SEE THIS SCARY MONSTER FOR YOURSELF.

Boldazar - shared writing by Room 14
With his beady bulging blue eye Boldazar can see all from underneath his big bushy eyebrows. He has a long blunt nose with nostrils like bouncy balls in-between his shabby hairy sideburns.
Boldazars mouldy rotten teeth are hidden beneath his shriveled dry lips and he has a long wrinkly chin like an elephants. Boldazar is covered with a blood red cloak and with his arched back and cane he shuffles and drags himself along. - WHAT DOES BOLDAZAR LOOK LIKE? COME IN AND SEE FOR YOURSELF.